Writing

Summarizing a source

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In short

A summary is the main point of a longer source in far fewer words. Summarize when you need the big picture and the details do not matter to your audience. A good summary:

Review: Check the summary

Read each example and decide what is wrong. Then click to check. The sources are made up.

Example 1: A play-by-play

Source: Alvarez (2021) followed 60 first-year teachers for a year. Teachers who met weekly with a mentor reported less stress and were more likely to stay in teaching.

Needs a fix First, Alvarez (2021) described the 60 teachers. Next, the study tracked the weekly meetings. Then it described stress and who stayed in teaching.
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Better version Alvarez (2021) found that first-year teachers who met weekly with a mentor felt less stress and were more likely to stay in teaching.

What changed: The first version retells the source in its order and never says what the study found. The better version gives the main point in one sentence.

Example 2: An opinion is mixed in

Source: Kim (2020) reported that students who tutored classmates gained as much as the students they tutored.

Needs a fix Kim’s (2020) article on peer tutoring was boring, but I think it is right that tutors gain as much as the students they help.
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Better version Kim (2020) reported that students who tutored classmates gained as much as the students they tutored. This supports using peer tutoring in our classrooms.

What changed: A summary keeps the source’s point, not your opinion. The better version summarizes first, then evaluates in a separate sentence.

Example 3: Too many details

Source: Rao (2020) surveyed 800 families in 12 districts about after-school programs. Cost and transportation were the biggest barriers. Programs that offered free bus service had 30% higher enrollment.

Needs a fix Rao (2020) surveyed 800 families in 12 districts about after-school programs and found that cost and transportation were the biggest barriers, and that programs that offered free bus service had 30% higher enrollment.
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Better version Rao (2020) found that cost and transportation keep families out of after-school programs, and that free transportation raised enrollment.

What changed: The first version is almost as long as the source because it keeps the numbers and the method. A summary drops the details on purpose and keeps the main point.